Wednesday 11/9

I really liked the Air Force Mortuary article; however, I feel like a delayed lede about the arm being sawed off would have been more effective. Instead, the author decided to leave it until the end. I feel like this was a wasted opportunity. While it is a gruesome thought, it would attract more attention to the article. Also, the article ended rather suddenly and I found myself looking for the rest of it before I realized that WAS it.