My News Writing assignments (including my views on the New York Times).
Sunday, November 6, 2011
Thursday 11/3
One thing I noticed while reading the Japanese Tsunami Barrier article is that the writer constantly put "critics say." I want to know who these critics are. It bothers me because its such an important topic, with lives at stake. I don't want information from a generic "critic." I do like how the background information was provided in mostly the lede and first few paragraphs. It made it easier to follow the story. This is especially true for such a lengthy article. Other than that, I'm sick of reading about Herman Cain. It's being blown up, and I understand he's a presidential candidate, but it's just gotten too overused on Page One.
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