Monday 11/7

I went straight to the NYC Marathon pieces. The lede for the Kenyan Star article was awkward in the end because the Berlin record could have been left out or save for later and it would have flowed better. The entire article's organization was off. Instead of focusing on one race at a time, I had to figure out who ran which race, which was really confusing when there was multiple times in one sentence. Also, the ending was awkward and could have just been left out (as in the last sentence). In the article about the women's race, all I have to say is that the lede was very boring and didn't make me want to read the rest at all.