Tuesday 11/29

Again, I don't like the layout of today's Page One. The large chunk of text on the right is too much, and this could be solved by taking the Citigroup article and moving it to the left of the picture. The Egyptian vote article had a very good summary lede, with all the facts in place. The writer also had the first quotation in the third paragraph. I have had issues with other articles in the NYT because a lot of the writers leave quotes for half way through the article, when I've lost interest.