My News Writing assignments (including my views on the New York Times).
Monday, November 14, 2011
Monday 11/14
In the Rio article (A4), the focus was supposed to be on cleaning the city's slums for the Olympics in 2016. After the lede, however, there is no mention of the Olympics. I feel that if you're going to title something/start with something, you shouldn't just mention it once and be done. The article was more focused on drug lords than the games the article claimed to talk about. I liked the article about the suspected Neo-Nazis in Germany and their arrests. The lede was a good, direct lede. Even though the ending quote was not attributed to anyone other than a "middle-aged man," I thought it was a good enough quote to print.
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