Sunday, October 2, 2011

Thursday 9/29

I didn't like the lede for "A Start-up Takes on a Titan." It was way too cheesy saying "a light bulb went off." However, I loved the lede - and the article - for "In a Quiet Village, Catching Up to a Hijacker." I was really interesting that the first bit of information was that he was dressed as a priest (delayed lede). Some of the text could have been broken up to make it easier to read, however, I didn't mind that as much.

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