Monday 10/17

Today I read mostly from the National section. First I'll talk about the Line Up Guy article on Page One. The lede was a great delayed lede but the article sort of stopped suddenly. Maybe it's just me thinking this for a lot of articles, but it seemed like, "I don't care what you've done," is a weird way to end the story. The quote didn't seem powerful enough. After that I read the National section. I did like the ending for the Kansas City Sermon article. Lastly, I read the Whale Hunt article. I felt that the writer should've mentioned the animal rights activists earlier. It was more of a narrative story than a news article, if that makes sense.