The article on Page One about crows was funny, and a good, light article. However, the lede and next few paragraphs were so cliche. "Crows. That's right. Crows." I feel like I've seen this line in so many articles in the past. I do love the scene of the little old lady packing heat and driving around her town. Another cheesy line in this article was when the writer wrote, "Bingo." Honestly? I do agree with the writer that a delayed lede was the best choice for this story.
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