Thursday 12/1

In the secret daughter article, I like the simple lede. The writer put those two famous names in and left out enough information to make it interesting. I wish there was some form of a quote before having to turn to another section of the paper. In the time to run article - in the style section - I didn't like how an entire paragraph was in parentheses. I like the quote the writer saved for the last paragraph, it was funny and a light-hearted ending.